Numb !!


Is it wrong to be numb? Why does the word have a negative connotation? Is it not just a natural reaction to certain circumstances and emotions? Then why is there this disposition to dissuade numbness? Is pure white not numb, does silence not endorse numbness? Peace is another form of numbness but peace is positive and numbness is not. Why?

Shutting the windows of my mind,
Erasing the thoughts left behind.
The sorrows of past had faded,
Into stillness, for which I had traded.

Slowing down thoughts, numbing brain,
Steady acid rain on the plains of pain.
There was no shouting, no screaming,
No flickering and no lights beaming.

The dark was comforting, it was still,
Soothing my soul with a comforting chill.
No screeching thoughts passing through,
Instead creepers of silence now grew.

I was the only one of many and I was the dot,
As I realized numbness is freedom not sought.

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  1. HarleenSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    And this one is my favourite...:) :)And when are you gonna write next..??

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  2. Abhas SrivastavaOctober 7, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    Well this can only be your favorite if you've ever felt this way :) right....well i'll definitely write something soon.....let's see...thanks for the appreciation though....

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  3. UnknownNovember 6, 2018 at 10:53 PM

    This is something I can get connected to...

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    1. Abhas SrivastavaNovember 7, 2018 at 10:52 PM

      Wow, I can only hope things work out differently for you. Am here if you ever feel like talking.

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